tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5140999662040898062.post8366162518563060990..comments2024-01-19T11:06:45.541-08:00Comments on <a href="http://brassbolts.blogspot.com">Brass Bolts</a>: Orphans of the Celestial Sea, E-1, C-3Mark Fengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01922616270777907779noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5140999662040898062.post-28421922537583064202012-09-27T07:52:48.655-07:002012-09-27T07:52:48.655-07:00Yea, finally done my beta-reading and can sit back...Yea, finally done my beta-reading and can sit back and re-enter my "reading for pleasure" mode. <br /><br />Honestly, can't find much to critique in this section. There's a lot of dialogue, but it never felt like talking heads syndrome to me. I followed the action well (which is impressive for me) and you had some really nice one-liners. I especially liked, "Sorry for choking you again."<br /><br />And, as an extra bonus, I now I know that knightliness is a word. ^_^Katrina S. Foresthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00782678919561852444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5140999662040898062.post-28358106567448594382012-09-17T23:02:50.446-07:002012-09-17T23:02:50.446-07:00Yes, of course you're right, thanks for the ca...Yes, of course you're right, thanks for the catch. I thought the spell-checker flagged Knightliness because it wasn't a real word. Turns out it really is a word and I just spelled it wrong.<br /><br />Glad to hear you're enjoying the story!Mark Fengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01922616270777907779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5140999662040898062.post-5385520591616663682012-09-17T22:24:46.674-07:002012-09-17T22:24:46.674-07:00Loving it so far!!! I never read on the computer,...Loving it so far!!! I never read on the computer, I love sitting in bed with a paperback, but I can't stop reading this!<br /><br />ps not sure if there should be a "t" in knightliness/knighliness <br />dlewallnoreply@blogger.com